A critique on my paper published in the Journal Turns No. 53, whose theme is "The Dream":
"The carnival - Lea Silva
A child running away (or has lost ) and faces the wrath of his parents.
The naivety of the child is properly exploited. But I have not hooked. No name, just the child, man, woman, mother, father. This I was distanced from the characters. Too impersonal.
Posted by BenoƮt Bourdeau
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